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what did/didn't you do yesterday?
Yesterday I got up at 9 o'clock. I ate dinner with my family. I wychodzącym TV with them too. In te evening I went to the Cinema with my dad and Brother. Film was very cool. I read the book late in the evening and I went sleep before 23 p.m.​


Odpowiedź :

Yesterday I got up at 9 o'clock. I ate breakfast with my family. I watched TV with them too. In the evening I went to the cinema with my dad and my brother. The film was very cool. Then, late in the evening I read a book and I went to sleep approximately at 10.45 p.m.

Komentarz:

  • dinner → kolacja, breakfast → śniadanie;
  • wychodzącym (chyba poprawiła Ci autokorekta) → watched;
  • przed słówkami film i evening stawiami 'the';
  • brother i cinema z małej litery;
  • słówko 'then' uspójnia tekst;
  • approximately → około - dobrze wpasuje się w tekst.

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