Odpowiedź :
Yesterday I got up at 9 o'clock. I ate breakfast with my family. I watched TV with them too. In the evening I went to the cinema with my dad and my brother. The film was very cool. Then, late in the evening I read a book and I went to sleep approximately at 10.45 p.m.
Komentarz:
- dinner → kolacja, breakfast → śniadanie;
- wychodzącym (chyba poprawiła Ci autokorekta) → watched;
- przed słówkami film i evening stawiami 'the';
- brother i cinema z małej litery;
- słówko 'then' uspójnia tekst;
- approximately → około - dobrze wpasuje się w tekst.
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