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Proszę o sprawdzenie mi zadania na angielski chodzi w nim o to, że miałam napisać Gmaila o moich feriach.


Hey Hania, I just got back from winter holidays, I was with my family for two weeks in Zakopane.

We had great winter weather there. There was a lot of snow there, we were skiing and I fell on them more than once and we were also sledging. Unfortunately, we didn't manage to skate because there were too many people in the area and we couldn't get on them.

It was very fun during the winter holidays, I recommend going to Zakopane for kisses, goodbye.​


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w drugim zdaniu usunęła bym te dwa "There" by się nie powtarzały np. "We had a great winter weather, There was a lot of snow" a reszta jest dobrze :)